my paranormal is being judged in the secret agent contest over at miss snark's first victim.
people are bringing up what i struggled over--the first line. maybe too much of a punch without follow-through.
also about the amount of beer a teenage boy-man can consume and not be passed out drunk. it's too bad they don't know mal's 6'5" and 300 lbs--a boy that size can down a lot of beers!